She could hardly sleep the night before as she practically
pranced into bed. Even her servants took
notice of her particularly happy demeanor.
Her thoughts swam around in her head as she dreamed of her future
husband. Sita absolutely could not wait
to become Rama’s wife. She did not
understand how he was so strong, kind, and simply wonderful. She was puzzled- she suspected him to be the
god of love, but the god of love has no body… However, she didn’t think too
much about it because she was so excited.
She wondered what kind of food he liked, if he would be home much, how
soon he wanted to have children (she secretly hoped that she’d have a son)… the
list went on and on. Although her mind
was very much awake, her body was exhausted from the pre-marital preparations
and she eventually fell asleep. The next
morning, as she sun shined softly on her face, she slowly woke up and then
realized what day it was- her wedding day! She skipped downstairs where her
servants were preparing her a meal. As
soon as she scarfed down breakfast, her maids dressed her in satin as she
picked out which jewels she would wear.
Sita could not remember the last time she felt so nervous or so
excited. She had not seen her father
that day but knew she would during the ceremony. The hours flew by and before she knew it,
Sita was standing next to her future husband and they joined hands in front of
her father and the rest of the on-lookers.
Her father said the vows and the new couple repeated them with smiles on
their faces. Sita’s father was almost as
excited as Sita was. After all, he set
up a challenge for any of Sita’s suitors.
The man he would allow his daughter to marry would have to string a bow
and arrow. As more and more suitors
failed, Sita’s father grew concerned that the challenge was too difficult and
also that Sita was becoming less desirable as she continued to age. However, when Rama entered the scene, all
that changed and for that reason, Sita’s father was one of Rama’s number one
fans. Back to the ceremony- the two
finished their vows as they exchanged nervous smiles. Although both were eager to start their lives
together, they had not had the chance to really get to know one another yet and
for that reason, they spent the next fourteen years together blissfully,
getting to know one another better and better every day.
Rama and Sita's coronation
(source: Wikipedia)
Author's Note: I chose to write my story about Rama and Sita's wedding for a couple reasons. For one, it marked a pivotal event in both of their lives. Also, I really enjoy love stories and weddings fit right along with that. Finally, from Buck's description, Sita spent quite a bit of time getting ready (or at least her servants did), so I wanted to describe more fully why and how she did. I chose to tell the story in third person but placed lots of emphasis on Sita's perspective because as a female, I feel that I can relate to how she would maybe feel leading up to her wedding day.
Bibliography: Buck, William (1976). Ramayana: King Rama's Way
I enjoyed your story, I think that you and Jessica (In our group) chose to write two very creative stories that actually compliment one another. You description was strong, so detailed in the way you characterized her thoughts that I actually pictured her jumping around all giddy. Who doesn't love weddings? I think this is a story everyone can relate to regardless of gender because a wedding day is a very important day full of tons of emotion for both people and the family and friends, and I like that you focused on Sita because in both versions Sita is not really focused on, she is almost a generic character on her wedding day, and your version creates a more well rounded Sita that helps to add to the depth of the character. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job with the descriptiveness of the story and the details that were added in. I really liked that you brought up the thoughts that Sita was having about her future. Both men and women have this same process after meeting someone new that they really like, the unknown of the future tends to entice us all. I think you did a great job writing it from a female perspective and really linking the narrator and Sita well.
ReplyDeleteTaylor, you did a fantastic job in this story of painting the scene of the wedding while incorporating Sita's thoughts and feelings. Your portrayal of Sita helped to bring her character to life, and--like Joe--I could practically see her dancing around her room waiting eagerly to be married. The short anecdote about Sita's father and how worried he was that no one would be able to complete his challenge also helped to illuminate the air of relief and excitement present at the wedding.
ReplyDeleteGreat work!